Outside wild, ice cold waves raged along the shore. Frozen grass crunched beneath my feet. Gray sky still and silent waited for company. Faraway frosty trees looked like toys.
Wednesday, 24 July 2019
Winter
In room 1 we have been learning about painting pictures in peoples, minds. I hope you see a picture too.
Outside wild, ice cold waves raged along the shore. Frozen grass crunched beneath my feet. Gray sky still and silent waited for company. Faraway frosty trees looked like toys.
Outside wild, ice cold waves raged along the shore. Frozen grass crunched beneath my feet. Gray sky still and silent waited for company. Faraway frosty trees looked like toys.
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Bonjour Timiah,
ReplyDeleteYou have used juicy verbs and it makes me feel I'm at the beach on a cold, wild wintery day. Maybe you could insert a picture to match your descriptive writing.
Mā te wā,
Mrs Naden
Bonjour Mrs Naden,
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting. I will change it.
Ma te wa
Timiah